Editorial Change ARIN-2022-10
Editorial Clean-up of NRPM Sections 2.4 and 2.5
Status: Pending Board of Trustees Review
Shepherds: Anita Nikolich, Kat Hunter
Current Text (23 August 2022)
This proposal continues the work that the ARIN AC NRPM Clean-up Working Group undertook to conduct an editorial review of the NRPM. It relates specifically to Sections 2.4 and 2.5. The focus of this proposal is to increase the consistency of terminology employed in the NRPM and ensure that the intended meaning of the text is clear.
In Section 2.4, change the text “address space” to “IP addresses”, and remove the comma after the text “(ISPs)”, and in Section 2.5, change the text “Address space” to “IP addresses” in each of the first four paragraphs and change the text “address space” to “IP addresses” in the last paragraph.
Timetable for Implementation: Immediate
This proposal is intended to be editorial in nature and to replace Prop-305 in part.
Staff and Legal Review (14 October 2022)
ARIN-edit-2022-10 makes minor editorial changes to NRPM Sections 2.4 and 2.5.
The policy text is clear and understandable.
Implementable as Written?: Yes
Impact on ARIN Registry Operations and Services:
No material legal issue.
Implementation Timeframe Estimate: 3 months
- Staff training
- Updates to public documentation
- Updates to internal procedures and guidelines
Proposal/Draft Policy Text Assessed: 23 August 2022
History and Earlier Versions
|Proposal||14 June 2022|
|Classified as Editorial Change||23 August 2022|
|New community review period|
|Advanced to Board of Trustees||20 December 2022|